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[your art is shit]

Your a fag. But here's the big secret, everyone's a fag just like you. so shut up fag. Yeah that makes sense.

dylan responds:

"let's go down to the tennis court, and talk it up like yeah"

- beyoncé, 2013

[The SIRI Project - Apple Parody (UNFINISHED)]

you shoulda finished it, you had something there, but now its just limp

FaveyOfficial responds:

I know, I know. Just began working on a "Game Grumps Animated" though, which will definitely be finished. Thanks for your words lol.

[NATA Sarcastic Inanimate Collab]

Some of these are actually pretty amazing, but some seem a bit off topic. I think a few were actually a bit lazy in their interpretation of something being sarcastic. Like some of them just seemed like objects reacting to something like a person would in that objects situation, not really being sarcastic. still the animation for all of them was actually pretty interesting and inspired. I just have trouble seeing "sarcasm" in a few of these. also that last one with the apple didn't make any sense to me, and quite frankly was underwhelming. Good Collab though :]

Pahgawk responds:

At this point the title "sarcastic" is, itself, sarcastic.

Also the apple one is a joke. At the end of every collab we add a joke one by "not clubpenguin300" in honour of the user clubpenguin300, who wanted so badly for us to make animations for him without him doing any work that we actually kind of did in these collabs. Click the heart icon next to the username on his entry to see what went down :)

[Coffee]

WOW this is fantastic :)
and All on paper too! forget about it man
This is great for what it is. I hope you continue to make little cartoons about random shit in the future. The only criticism I can give is maybe think of ways to out do yourself.
Like I mean maybe try to do more complicated animation or something
Basically my criticism is me saying keep doing what your doing and continue to improve and grow as a cartoon making guy. so... yeah
again great cartoon man :)

[Against The Evils-Part 4]

that was actually pretty creative.
the only criticism I have is that the beginning is boring, or maybe a bit too quiet. I thought the sound was busted or something cuz that whole "fast blur" samurai guy should have had a sound effect on him or something, and maybe the kight dudes should have had some sort of rumble when they talked. I don't mean voice acting I just mean like a metal scraping sound effect or something that makes it more enjoyable.
The sound in this cartoon is kind of weird and broken to me. I get that the song is kinda to hype up the action scene and everything, but it sucks, when you realize you just put it on loop, and do the same with the cartoon or pixel movie or whatever. really the animation and story is okay for what it is, but the sound is garbage. If you had put a bit more effort into your timing of songs, and put more sound effects to imply movement or characterization I really would have enjoyed this much more.

also the story should be a little more put together than just "look at this scene, okay enough ninjas and samurais now the main character, wait no forget that idiot, focus on the two dudes fighting the one dude, and then a girl" it seems a little all over the place, at least for my taste.
also at the "end" where you panned into the words that was lame, it took me out of the movie. It made me realize I was looking at my computer screen and not having fun in the adventures of this "against the evils" world.

Its got potential, animation and everything is solid, but the rest is a little sloppy right now, and if you can just fix a few problems here and there this could be amazing

Jerry589 responds:

Your thinking is exactly the same as me. For the sound, the first 2 scenes were quietless, making anyone think that the whole video is quiet-less like that, and then the sound suddenly pops up in the 3rd scene making anyone think "hey wait, was my computer on mute or something". I'll focus on sounds by the next Chapter.

Thanks for all the compliment, after your line that the animation is good, I started feeling like, at least my animating skills have gotten better. :)

[The Birdie Dance]

HAHAHA

that bitch does look like a bird.
animation was a bit choppy, but i can see thats what you were going for, then end was pretty good too.
Overall its just a nice little joke, and a well put together cartoon.
the only criticism i have is that maybe the timing of moves could be a slightly better maybe just around the beginning, everything else seemed good

nice job man :]

[growing seed]

Not a bad scene in mind my friend, but if you may allow me I would like to give some constructive criticism.

While it is very well timed, and has good composition, the animation is a little funky.
It doesn't exactly look too good. It sorta looks like you took one drawing and tweened it up, and erased it every once in a while to make it look like its growing out. Its not a bad idea to take a couple of shortcuts here and there, so long as the end result still looks good, but here it sorta makes the animation look just a little too mechanical.

But hey Practice makes perfect or some bullshit like that, and its actually a lot better than my first attempts so you are on your way.

joshboy101 responds:

you got it right I pretty much tweened EVERYTHING :3 the dirt splatter was the only thing that wasn't really twind together :P

[Sonex the Hodgehead: Ep1]

This is so flipping awesome. I have no idea why, but the funniest thing will always be the most realistic sonex crying about the dude who was like "long time no see", and sonex is like "long time no see...."

I know you probably gave a lot of thought into writing the script, and maybe taking the normal sonic parody into something that isn't shitty, and I got to say, you did a good job man.

I find it a bit odd that you had a featured animator, I really haven't heard of anything like that being done, but its actually kind of interesting. The animation was certainly very creative and pleasing to look at.
You guys did a swell job :]